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Thursday 3 November 2011

To a Mouse (the Update)


This is an attempt to make Robert Burns world-famous poem more accessible to a modern urban audience. Burns lived in a stone country cottage, a world away from how we live now. Not only his archaic dialect words, but also his rustic sentimentality, are alien to today's people. I was inspired to bring it up-to-date by similar treatments accorded to Shakespeare's plays for the school audience.

To a Mouse

                                    Wee sleekit, cowrin' tim'rous beastie,
                                    O what a panic's in thy breastie;
                                    It's wise ye've run away so hasty,
                                    For ye've been nibblin' at ma pastry.

                                    Furtively ye steal ma food,
                                    And what ye leave is nae so guid;
                                    Ye reek so bad I can aye smell it,
                                    Ye've strewn ma flat wi' wee brown pellets.

                                    Behind the plasterboard ye scurry,
                                    Ye're always in an awfu' hurry;
                                    Both night and day ye're scamp'rin' proud,
                                    Frae one so small, it sounds quite loud.

                                    If I can lay ma hands on ye,
                                    I'll smash ye tae a pulp.

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